25-Page Critique Plus Package of Books from Agent Natalie Lakosil of Bradford Literary Agency

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Agent Natalie Lakosil of the Bradford Literary Agency is offering a critique of 25 pages, plus a package of books hand-selected personally by her!
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Query Critique #5 from Agent Suzie Townsend of New Leaf Literary

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This listing is for the fifth (and final chance!) of five query critiques offered by Suzie Townsend of New Leaf Literary!

After teaching high school English for several years, Suzie Townsend started publishing at FinePrint Literary Management in January 2009 and worked her way up from intern to agent. Now an agent at New Leaf Literary, she represents adult and children's fiction.
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40-Page Critique by Agent Tricia Lawrence of Erin Murphy Literary

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Tricia Lawrence has donated an email critique of your forty pages! An Associate Agent, Tricia is the "Pacific Northwest branch" of EMLA—born and raised in Oregon, and now lives in Seattle. After 18 years of working as a developmental and production-based editor (from kids book to college textbooks, but mostly college textbooks), she joined the EMLA team in March 2011 as a social media strategist.

Query Critique #4 from Agent Suzie Townsend of New Leaf Literary

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This listing is for the fourth of five query critiques offered by Suzie Townsend of New Leaf Literary!

After teaching high school English for several years, Suzie Townsend started publishing at FinePrint Literary Management in January 2009 and worked her way up from intern to agent. Now an agent at New Leaf Literary, she represents adult and children's fiction.
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Query Plus 1st Chapter Critique with Agent Brooks Sherman of The Bent Agency

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Brooks Sherman represents picture books, fiction for young adult and middle-grade-readers, select literary and commercial adult fiction, and nonfiction in the areas of humor, pop culture, and narrative nonfiction. Brooks is donating a critique on your query and first chapter!
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Query Critique #3 from Agent Suzie Townsend of New Leaf Literary

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This listing is for the third of five query critiques offered by Suzie Townsend of New Leaf Literary!

After teaching high school English for several years, Suzie Townsend started publishing at FinePrint Literary Management in January 2009 and worked her way up from intern to agent. Now an agent at New Leaf Literary, she represents adult and children's fiction.
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Query Critique #2 from Agent Suzie Townsend of New Leaf Literary

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This listing is for the second of five query critiques offered by Suzie Townsend of New Leaf Literary!

After teaching high school English for several years, Suzie Townsend started publishing at FinePrint Literary Management in January 2009 and worked her way up from intern to agent. Now an agent at New Leaf Literary, she represents adult and children's fiction.
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Query Critique #1 from Agent Suzie Townsend of New Leaf Literary

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This listing is for the first of five query critiques offered by Suzie Townsend of New Leaf Literary!

After teaching high school English for several years, Suzie Townsend started publishing at FinePrint Literary Management in January 2009 and worked her way up from intern to agent. Now an agent at New Leaf Literary, she represents adult and children's fiction.
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Query Critique #5 from Suzie Townsend of New Leaf Literary

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This listing is for the fifth (and final) of five query critiques offered by Suzie Townsend of New Leaf Literary!

After teaching high school English for several years, Suzie Townsend started publishing at FinePrint Literary Management in January 2009 and worked her way up from intern to agent. Now an agent at New Leaf Literary, she represents adult and children's fiction.

Critique of A Picture Book and Query by Kathleen Rushall of Marsal Lyon Literary Agency

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Kathleen Rushall of Marsal Lyon Literary has offered up a picture book and query critique

Query Critique #4 from Suzie Townsend of New Leaf Literary

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This listing is for the fourth of five query critiques offered by Suzie Townsend of New Leaf Literary!

After teaching high school English for several years, Suzie Townsend started publishing at FinePrint Literary Management in January 2009 and worked her way up from intern to agent. Now an agent at New Leaf Literary, she represents adult and children's fiction.

50 Page Critique by Natalie Lakosil of Bradford Literary Agency

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Agent Natalie Lakosil of the Bradford Literary Agency is offering a critique of 50 pages

Natalie is an agent and Laura’s assistant at the Bradford Literary Agency. An honors graduate of the University of San Diego, California, Natalie holds a B.A. in Literature/Writing. After nearly four years at the Sandra Dijkstra Literary Agency and a brief dabble in writing author profiles and book reviews for the San Diego Union Tribune, Natalie joined the Bradford Agency in February of 2011.

Query Critique #3 from Suzie Townsend of New Leaf Literary

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This listing is for the third of five query critiques offered by Suzie Townsend of New Leaf Literary!

After teaching high school English for several years, Suzie Townsend started publishing at FinePrint Literary Management in January 2009 and worked her way up from intern to agent. Now an agent at New Leaf Literary, she represents adult and children's fiction.

Critique of Your Query, Synopsis, and First Chapter by Pam van Hylckama Vlieg of Foreword Literary

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Agent Pam van Hylckama Vlieg of Foreword Literary is offering up a critique of your query, synopsis, and first chapter (up to 15 pages). 

Pam van Hylckama Vlieg started her literary career as assistant to Laurie McLean in early 2012. By April Pam was promoted to Associate Agent at Larsen Pomada. In January of 2013 after selling twenty-one books in her first year of agenting Pam was promoted to agent. When Laurie McLean mentioned creating Foreword, Pam jumped at the chance to follow her mentor and create a new agency together. Pam blogs at Bookalicio.us, Bookalicious.org, and Brazen Reads. She partners her blogs with her local bookseller Hicklebee’s where magic happens daily.

Query Critique #2 from Suzie Townsend of New Leaf Literary

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This listing is for the second of five query critiques offered by Suzie Townsend of New Leaf Literary!

After teaching high school English for several years, Suzie Townsend started publishing at FinePrint Literary Management in January 2009 and worked her way up from intern to agent. Now an agent at New Leaf Literary, she represents adult and children's fiction.

Query and First Chapter Critique from Sarah LaPolla of Curtis Brown Ltd

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This listing is for a critique of your query and first chapter by literary agent Sarah LaPolla of the Curtis Brown Ltd agency.

Sarah LaPolla is an associate agent at Curtis Brown, Ltd. She studied creative writing at Ithaca College, and has an MFA in creative nonfiction from The New School. She joined Curtis Brown, Ltd. in 2008 as the assistant to the foreign rights department, and became an associate agent in 2010. 

5,000-Word Critique and Swag from Author Rachele Alpine

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Rachele Alpine's debut novel, Canary, is due out from Medallion Press in August, so we weren't able to include a copy here, alas! But Rachele has kindly offered up a critique of the first 5,000 words of your middle grade or young adult novel, plus she'll send you a Canary postcard and bookmark!

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Query Critique #1 from Suzie Townsend of New Leaf Literary

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This listing is for the first of five query critiques offered by Suzie Townsend of New Leaf Literary!

After teaching high school English for several years, Suzie Townsend started publishing at FinePrint Literary Management in January 2009 and worked her way up from intern to agent. Now an agent at New Leaf Literary, she represents adult and children's fiction.

35-Page Critique with Assoc. Agent Pam van Hylckama Vlieg of Larsen-Pomada Literary

 Associate Agent and author Pam van Hylckama Vlieg will critique 35 pages of your manuscript!

100-Page Critique from Super-Awesome Agent Natalie Lakosil of Bradford Literary

Natalie Fischer Lakosil is an Associate Agent at Bradford Literary with lots of good buzz on the internet, both for her deals and for how much her clients love her.