Critique Of Your Submission Package From Operation Awesome

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The operatives at Operation Awesome will critique your submission package, which includes your Twitter pitch, query, synopsis, and first chapter! They're also including an e-book of America's Next Reality Star by Laura Heffernan
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Critique of Your Query, Synopsis, and First Chapter by Pam van Hylckama Vlieg of Foreword Literary

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Agent Pam van Hylckama Vlieg of Foreword Literary is offering up a critique of your query, synopsis, and first chapter (up to 15 pages). 

Pam van Hylckama Vlieg started her literary career as assistant to Laurie McLean in early 2012. By April Pam was promoted to Associate Agent at Larsen Pomada. In January of 2013 after selling twenty-one books in her first year of agenting Pam was promoted to agent. When Laurie McLean mentioned creating Foreword, Pam jumped at the chance to follow her mentor and create a new agency together. Pam blogs at Bookalicio.us, Bookalicious.org, and Brazen Reads. She partners her blogs with her local bookseller Hicklebee’s where magic happens daily.