Thursday, May 5, 2016

Critique of Query Plus 1st 50 Pages from Natalie Lakosil of Bradford Literary

Agent Natalie Lakosil is once again stepping up for the kitties, by offering a critique of your query and first fifty pages!
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Natalie is an agent at the Bradford Literary Agency. An honors graduate of the University of San Diego, California, Natalie holds a B.A. in Literature/Writing. After nearly four years at the Sandra Dijkstra Literary Agency and a brief dabble in writing author profiles and book reviews for the San Diego Union Tribune, Natalie joined the Bradford Agency in February of 2011.

Natalie is drawn to talented, hard-working new authors with a fresh, unique voice and hook. Her specialties are children’s literature (from picture book through teen and New Adult), romance (contemporary and historical), cozy mystery/crime, upmarket women’s/general fiction and select children’s nonfiction. Her interests include historical, multi-cultural, magical realism, sci-fi/fantasy, gritty, thrilling and darker contemporary novels, middle grade with heart, and short, quirky or character-driven picture books. She is always drawn to an open and positive attitude in an author, professionalism, good grammar, and fantastical, beautifully written, engaging and sexy plots.

Natalie is not looking for: Inspirational novels, memoir, romantic suspense, adult thrillers, poetry, screenplays

This item will close on May 7, 2016, at 9:00 PM EST. Any bids placed after that time stamp will not be honored. Once the auction closes and payment from the highest bidder is confirmed, instructions on how to send your pages to Natalie will be emailed to the winner. Since the files will be submitted electronically, this item is open internationally.


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Angelica R. Jackson said...

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$130 for the kitties!

Twitter: sincerelyamelia

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Anonymous said...

Okay, $200 for the kitties!

Twitter: sincerelyamelia

Angelica R. Jackson said...

Bidding on this item is now closed! Congratulations, Ameliadianecoombs, you had the winning bid! Please watch for an email from Pens for Paws and respond to it within 24 hours

Anonymous said...

Yay, thank you so much for doing this. Such a lovely cause that also helps us writers!

- Amelia

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